smilie
i poud of how it came out. props to both of us
smilie
i poud of how it came out. props to both of us
Hell yeah, man!
I was really surprised by how great we sound too!
Your singing was beautiful, my verse was pretty good and your verse was off the hook!
We did great!
awww
i actually it thought it got worse as it went on. i really loved the beginning like alot
:'(... still, I'm glad you liked it... part of it :D...
Thanks for your comments.
very well done
very awesome story telling with it as well
Thanks for the review. ;D
awesome
really does give me the entering a cheery kingdom at first then it goes more dramatic. i like the transition, only wish it had more bite on some parts. but this is very well composed
Thanks for the feedback~!
needs work
it sounds like an unfinished project
yup it does lol its been long time i wasnt making music so im coming back rusty with the fades and all il make the better
yes
this was very very well made good job man
~ Takes Bow ~
i dunno
i really think these lyrics are very poorly written. usually people right bad lyrics in order to ryme...anyways i didnt care for the music that much either. high quality and overall i know the effort was put in. i think you should definately work on better lyrical content
Thanks :)
I'm usually writing about completely different things in my band, I'm not experienced in the soft RnB side of things.
I will definatley practice though, :)
needs help on dramatic line @_@
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